How is My Driving

[blind_devil]

How is My Driving

Feel free to tell me how I'm doing you know you want to.

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[last_ofthe_jedi]

I freaking adore your Matt. Every sentence you write is like crack and I can't get enough. And therein lies the problem lol. I practically dance in my chair whenever I see a new tag from you in my inbox, but I can't help but feel disappointed a lot of the time when I open it up. What you do write is great but I often feel that your tags are so, so short.

And sure, size isn't everything, etc... but it's not just size. I've noticed that you usually only write a response to the very last few sentences or so of my tags. Like, Matt will reply to the last thing Luke said, but if he did something right before that, that doesn't get a response. It winds up feeling a bit empty or anticlimactic, like it's missing too much. And then I have to figure out reasons that Luke doesn't feel disappointed/confused that something he did or said went ignored.

For example, in your latest tag Luke was being all sweet and touching his face and all Matt did in response was say "yeah let's go" and start walking. If I were staying really IC Luke would throw up his hands in frustration and say "okay do you like me or not? I'm getting really mixed messages here!" Matt ends up feeling very cold and distant in those moments, when in others it's very obvious he's not.

Your writing and characterization are amazing, I think it's just that you skip the bulk of the tag's content that's the problem. The missing reactions would add so much and make a *world* of difference, really. Even just stating that Matt is still feeling shy and can only smile nervously when Luke touches him, or something like that. Any reaction is a good one, I'd just love to see it written down.

I know we only just started RPing together but know that I only bother HMDing people who I'm really excited to play with because I feel like they're worth the potential shyness/fear that comes with sending critique. Like, I don't think I've done this in well over a year or two. Especially long messages like this where I spend half of it going sdkfjhsdkfjh over the CR lol. >_> Okay I should stop gushing.

[soxingit]

Hi! Before I start I just wanted to let you know that Matt Murdock is one of my favorite MCU characters and that's why I'm coming to you today to see if you can perhaps clarify a couple of things for me.

So one of the things that we see in not only the show but also the comics is that Matt's Catholicism is a huge part of who he is as a character - the weight of violence is always on his mind like when he says that his soul will be damned if he kills Wilson Fisk or just the fact that he takes Catholic guilt to high levels. He brings his guilt to the Church where he has several conversations with a priest both in and out of Confession.

Now his relationship with Karen and Elektra are also bigh parts of his life. Karen is a close friend and a one time love interest and Elektra though polar opposite of Matt, well they're pretty much glued together in canon. Even though she keeps trying to pull out the darker side of him that he tries to repress, he's still drawn to her and obviously loves her and keeps trying to get her to redeem herself. In the show, her death devastated him and into the Defenders, you can see where it's changed his life almost completely to where he's throwing himself into his work and working lots of pro bono cases while he was still grieving over her. How is he handling that loss on the island? I haven't seen much of Matt even attempting to talk to Karen, and was wondering why that was since they are friends in canon.

I was wondering if these were things that you have considered and if so, where are they explored through RP? I admit that I was disappointed to see that it doesn't appear to have been addressed nor does Matt seem to have overly struggled with these issues ICLY. So I suppose I'm wondering just how exactly you've got him to deal with these issues on an island that revolves around sex and forced intimacy?